Monday, November 8, 2010

Brothers In War

This is a short story I wrote for a history project. The assignment (given to us on October 25th) was to  write a fictional piece approximately 5-6 pages long about a character that comes from any background, any country, any prejudice, as long as that character lived during or contributed to WWII.
The assignment is due today. I wrote this story in around 4 hours this morning and afternoon. Here's a hint to anyone seeking to not fail high school: Don't do that. It was stupid. I trusted myself too much.
However, I hope you enjoy this . . . :


Ten years ago, we had no idea this was coming. We had no idea we were headed toward being connected with a word such as “genocide”. I have always been devoted to my country, but this particular man never struck me as quite right in the head. He’s never been anything but overpowering. We saw that part of him, but had no issues with it at the time. But this . . . this is too far. Someone needs to stop this man before he succeeds in eliminating a group of human beings from the face of the earth forever.
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“Lukas! Lukas!” I let out a strained whisper, not daring to be heard by anyone that might be nearby. I knew he couldn’t hear me, but saying his name made me feel a little bit better. “Lukas! Luke!” I opened the basement door and ducked my head as I descended. “Luke!”
“Arlen! What could you possibly have been doing out there for three hours?”
“I took a walk. Sorry.” I always hated lying to him, especially now that he was a hostage of sorts, but he did not need to know that I met Farica after I bought food. The matter had no relevance since there was no way it harmed or bettered him. “Here’s the bread.”
“Thank you.” We sat down. “So what did happen across the street last night? I was tempted to look, but my nerves got the better of me, which was probably a good thing.”
“Fire. They burned it down.”
“Cruelty. Pure cruelty. I told you, I told you there was something we missed.” Lukas had told me—hundreds of times—that Adolf Hitler was hiding something; that he had some secret agenda that everyone was letting go because of his energetic speeches. Lukas said, over and over, things like “That man will go down in flames one day” or “Mark my words: People will bow at his feet and he will send them off to die.” Never had my adopted brother been more right. He always was the smart one of the family, however screwed up people thought he was.
“Yes, you did. You were right. You were always right.” Yet, never had I wished more that Lukas was wrong. It would have saved us a lot of heartache.
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Though Arlen Schaefer was seven years older, he brought Lukas into his “family” and treated him like a brother ever since Lukas was nine. Neither of them had much, Arlen reasoned, so why shouldn’t they share what they do have? Lukas had never objected to even the kindest treatments Arlen offered to him; there was a sort of understanding there that each of them would contribute what they wanted to the other’s life and the other had to accept it. “It’s because we’re brothers,” Arlen had said on Lukas’ eleventh birthday. “A brother never leaves his brother behind. So we’ll do this together.”
Lukas was thankful that Arlen remembered where he was from, even when he couldn’t himself. Arlen had to remind him when he was seventeen that his parents were Jewish, or he would have forgotten. Religion never meant much to him, at least, not before November 16, 1941. He would remember that day forever.
Lukas and Arlen were not home when (from what the neighbors said) three men wearing square-ish hats broke down the door and searched the entire place. The two had come home to absolutely everything looking like it had been run over by a tank.
“I told you this would happen.”
“I know.”
Arlen did know, for Lukas had a habit of making all his theories known to the person nearest to him when he conjured it. That person usually happened to be Arlen. The theories were typically minor, but in times like these (for example, every single moment following Kristallnacht, which had occurred almost exactly three years previous), everyone in the world had harsher theories than before. The most recent of Lukas’ theories involved what had just happened with the house: Nazis storming and raiding for Jews wherever they could. The only fortunate part of everything lying in ruin was that the two young men had not been around.
They looked into the house solemnly and didn’t need more words than those while they spent a week cleaning as much of the house as they could. It was that week that they decided that Lukas should remain in the basement until the war blew over. It had to at some point, they reasoned.
Arlen brought Lukas food and clothes and no one ever bothered to question about the two orphans from completely separate families that had once lived in the house. All the people on the street had fled, joined the army, been taken away to camps, or never left their houses anymore for fear they too would be killed and forgotten.
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“They can’t do this, Luke. It’s never been right!”
“They are doing it, Arlen. They’ve been doing it, and so far there’s no other country that matches Germany. There’s nothing the world can do for us now.”
“These people have gone mad. Someone needs to stand up and—”
“Don’t put those ideas in your head. You know what will happen if you go out there and are spotted, ‘specially now that the letter’s here.”
While I was buying our second loaf of bread that month, a letter had slipped under the door. It seemed more like a death summons to me, considering I’d rather die than join those Nazi monsters. They seemed to think that threats would bring me down. The letter said something about them using force if I did not comply in a set time. I could not care less what they did to me; all of my energy would continue to go to hiding my brother and supplying for his needs. Lukas was much more important to me than my own safety.
“They ignored us for so long. Why now? Why would they try to bring you in now, after three years?" Lukas wondered aloud. I couldn't help but wonder the same thing.
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On June 3, 1943 Lukas Reinhardt Schaefer was found and beaten almost unconscious before the Nazis shipped him off to a concentration camp named Dachau. Dachau was located approximately ten miles northwest of Munich and served as a model for several other concentration camps that followed. I, Arlen Schaefer, was not home at the time Lukas was found. I had gone out for only the first time that week and came home to the house, once again, destroyed. At that very moment I realized that I could no longer stay there. I walked as fast as I could for two miles or so and settled momentarily in a house that had previously been raided and was empty at the time.
I had never been more worried about anything in my life. Lukas was only 24. He was almost never in school as far as I knew, but he had a better head on his shoulders than anyone I had ever met. I found a deep red journal on one of the snapped-in-half tables that had been written on only once, and that writing looked vaguely like a grocery list, though I really couldn’t tell. I became reminiscent and started writing down every memory I could think of involving Lukas, keeping the theories he conjured on a separate page, laughing at some of the absurdities he conveyed to me before we slept some nights. His mind was strange, but sharp, and as I kept track of the conspiracies he predicted, I realized how right he really was about all of it. He regularly predicted political events, including to an extent his own capture. He knew they were coming for him someday; he may or may not have known just how soon. If only I had been there. But no, he would have scolded me for that kind of thinking. He would have said something about “at least one of us is alive.”
Indeed, though I never knew exactly what happened to Lukas, I came to find myself accepting his death. The saddest day of my life was the day Dachau was liberated. However happy I may have been for those that were now free, I was lost in the overpowering thought that I would never see my dear brother again. April was now one of my least favorite months of the year, second only to June—the month I lost a companion, my only family, my best friend, my brother.

~Allison
(P.S.: All of my facts came from Wikipedia. Don't do that either.) 



Tuesday, November 2, 2010

The Devil's Monologue

Hey!

I couldn't find anything that I felt like posting today that I wrote, so I picked up this section from the final book in the Left Behind young adult series that I decided to type up one day. This is a monologue that Jerry Jenkins and Tim LaHaye wrote as if it came from the mouth of the devil himself, speaking through Nicolae Carpathia (the antichrist). I absolutely love the way they used well-known Bible stories in this. Enjoy.
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Ladies and gentlemen, the time has come for me to take you into my confidence. We must all be on the same page in order to win the ultimate battle. Look into my eyes and listen, because what you hear today is truth and you will have no trouble believing every word of it. I am eternal. I am from everlasting to everlasting. I was there at the beginning, and I will remain through eternity future.
Here is the problem: the one who calls himself God is not God. I will concede that he preceded me. When I evolved out of the primordial ooze and water, he was already there. But plainly, he had come about in the same manner I did. Simply because he preceded me, he wanted me to think he created me and all the other beings like him in the vast heavens. I knew better. Many of us did.
He tried to tell us we were created as ministering servants. We had a job to do. He said he had created humans in his own image and that we were to serve them. Had I been there first, I could have told him that I had created him and that it was he who would serve me by ministering to my other creations.
But he did not create anything! We, all of us-you, me, the other heavenly hosts, men and women-all came from that same primordial soup. But no! Not according to him! He was there with another evolved being like myself, and he claimed that one as his favored son. He was the special one, the chosen one, the only begotten one.
I knew from the beginning it was a lie and that I--all of us--was being used. I was a bright and shining angel. I had ambition. I had ideas. But that was threatening to the older one. He called himself the creator God, the originator of life. He took the favored position. He demanded that the whole earth worship and obey him. I had the audacity to ask why. Why not me?
About a third of the other evolved beings agreed with me and took my side, promised to remain loyal. The other two-thirds were weaklings, easily swayed. They took the side of the so-called father and his so-called son.
We have been mortal enemies ever since, that father and that son and I. He even persuaded the evolved humans that he created them! But that could not be true, because if he had, they would not have free will. And if he created me, I would not have been able to rebel. It only makes sense.
Once I figured that out, I began enjoying my role as the outcast. I found humans, the ones he liked to call his own, the easiest to sway. The woman with the fruit! She did not want to obey. It took nothing, mere suggestion, to get her to do what she really wanted.
And the first human siblings-they were easy! The younger was devoted to the one who called himself the only true God, but the other…ah, the other wanted only what I wanted: A little something for himself. Before you know it, I am proving beyond doubt that these creatures are not really products of the older angel’s creativity. Within a few generations I have them so confused, so selfish, so full of themselves that the old man no longer wants to claim they were made in his image.
They get drunk; they fight; they blaspheme. They are stubborn; they are unfaithful. They kill each other. The only ones I cannot get through to are Noah and his kin. Of course, the great creator decides the rest of history depends on them and wipes out everyone else with a flood. I eventually got to Noah, but he had already started repopulating the earth.
Yes, I will admit it. The father and the son have been formidable foes over the generations. They have their favorites--the Jews, of all people. The Jews are the apples of the elder’s eye, but therein lies his weakness. He has such a soft spot for them that they will be his undoing.
My forces and I almost had them wiped out not so many generations ago, but father and son intervened, gave them back their own land, and foiled us again. Fate has toyed with us many times, my friends, but in the end we shall prevail.
Father and son thought they were doing the world a favor by putting their intentions in writing. The whole plan is there, from sending the son to die and resurrect, to foretelling this entire period. Yes, many millions bought into this great lie. Up to now I would have to acknowledge that the other side has had the advantage.
But two great truths will be their undoing. First, I know the truth. They are not greater or better than I or anyone else. They came from the same place we all did. And second, they must not have realized that I can read. I read their book! I know what they are up to! I know what happens next, and I even know where!
Let them turn the lights off in the great city that I loved so much! Ah, how beautiful it was when it was the center for commerce and government, and the great ships and planes brought in goods from all over the globe. So it is dark now. And so what if it is eventually destroyed? I will build it back up, because I am more powerful than father and son combined. 
Let them shake the earth until it is level and drop hundred-pound chunks of ice from the skies. I will win in the end because I have read their battle plan. The old man plans to send the son to set up the kingdom he predicted more than three hundred times in his book, and he even tells where he will land! Ladies and gentlemen, we will have a surprise waiting for him.
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Excellent writing. Love it.
~Allison